It's a living h-e-l-l
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Shining Darkness
Press2000
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Re: It's a living h-e-l-l
one extra isnt too bad is it?????
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I guess not! So... Are we doing this in third or third person? In all the roleplays I've done have done it in third person, sort of like you would tell a story... With quotes and such. But, I don't know....
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Cleston- Posts : 1404
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first or third.CottonCandy wrote:I guess not! So... Are we doing this in third or third person? In all the roleplays I've done have done it in third person, sort of like you would tell a story... With quotes and such. But, I don't know....
first is saying like.... "I ran to the house"
third is "Bob ran into the brick wall"
Shining Darkness- Posts : 4039
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It's a living H-E-L-L
*walks over to my house and sits on the porch.*
it'd be awsome if we went in their.
I wonder if the gang would wanna go?
*drinks a coke.*
yuck! it's flat
*throws soda on the ground*
it'd be awsome if we went in their.
I wonder if the gang would wanna go?
*drinks a coke.*
yuck! it's flat
*throws soda on the ground*
Re: It's a living h-e-l-l
CottonCandy wrote:I guess not! So... Are we doing this in third or third person? In all the roleplays I've done have done it in third person, sort of like you would tell a story... With quotes and such. But, I don't know....
I'm not the quating fan. so do it as if ur the person doing it...
like:
I walked over to the chair.
Stuff like that
Re: It's a living h-e-l-l
Living Skeleton. wrote:first or third.CottonCandy wrote:I guess not! So... Are we doing this in third or third person? In all the roleplays I've done have done it in third person, sort of like you would tell a story... With quotes and such. But, I don't know....
first is saying like.... "I ran to the house"
third is "Bob ran into the brick wall"
Haha oops. Sorry. I meant First or Third.
CottonCandy- Posts : 2141
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((So... In first person? I'll make an extreme attempt. I've never done
it like this before... We should use an Out of Character form though,
correct? e.g.
putting things that are not part of the story in parentheses and such?))
I looked in the mirror at myself, wondering what to do with it. It was
in a loose ponytail, just to get it out of my face for a while. I
glanced at the clock. It read 7:30. I was going to be late meeting with
my friends. I took out the ponytail and let my hair fall over my
shoulders and onto my back. I carefully parted my hair, and pushed hair
over my shoulders of either side. I made sure the part was perfectly
straight, else I wouldn't be satisfied. Once I knew it was exact, I
grabbed two green ribbons out of my collection. I slowly tied one
ribbon over each of the sides of hair, making low pigtails. I smiled in
the mirror, happy that (once again), it looked great. I grabbed my bag
and hurried down the stairs. I ran out of the door to my house, all the
way down the street. I spotted one of my friends, Arya. "Arya!" I shouted. I sprinted towards her. I grinned, hoping she wouldn't care or notice of me being late. I looked up toward the big mansion in front of us. "Geez... That place is huge. Isn't it said to be haunted or something?" I asked, shuddering. It wasn't my fault I wasn't the courageous one. I hated scary places. Somehow, I always get wounded up in doing something I don't want to. I figured this was going to happen today. I sighed, helpless.
it like this before... We should use an Out of Character form though,
correct? e.g.
putting things that are not part of the story in parentheses and such?))
I looked in the mirror at myself, wondering what to do with it. It was
in a loose ponytail, just to get it out of my face for a while. I
glanced at the clock. It read 7:30. I was going to be late meeting with
my friends. I took out the ponytail and let my hair fall over my
shoulders and onto my back. I carefully parted my hair, and pushed hair
over my shoulders of either side. I made sure the part was perfectly
straight, else I wouldn't be satisfied. Once I knew it was exact, I
grabbed two green ribbons out of my collection. I slowly tied one
ribbon over each of the sides of hair, making low pigtails. I smiled in
the mirror, happy that (once again), it looked great. I grabbed my bag
and hurried down the stairs. I ran out of the door to my house, all the
way down the street. I spotted one of my friends, Arya. "Arya!" I shouted. I sprinted towards her. I grinned, hoping she wouldn't care or notice of me being late. I looked up toward the big mansion in front of us. "Geez... That place is huge. Isn't it said to be haunted or something?" I asked, shuddering. It wasn't my fault I wasn't the courageous one. I hated scary places. Somehow, I always get wounded up in doing something I don't want to. I figured this was going to happen today. I sighed, helpless.
CottonCandy- Posts : 2141
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Elizabeth scanned herself in the mirror once. Jeans, sneakers, hoodie, bun. Check. Everything in order. She casually strutted out of the house, dragging her feet lightly making scarping sounds along the sidewalk.
scccr scccr scccr scccr
Soon, she reached the corner and waited with the others, not saying much of anything. when everyone had gathered, Elizabeth walked the farthest behind in the group as they went to the dark, old, tumbling mansion. Someone asked about it being haunted.
"Hmm, most likely not. Maybe cobwebs and stuff, but I highly doubt there's ghosts, goblins, witches or anything..." Elizabeth commented, off-handedly, not quite paying attention to her words as they rolled off her tongue.
scccr scccr scccr scccr
Soon, she reached the corner and waited with the others, not saying much of anything. when everyone had gathered, Elizabeth walked the farthest behind in the group as they went to the dark, old, tumbling mansion. Someone asked about it being haunted.
"Hmm, most likely not. Maybe cobwebs and stuff, but I highly doubt there's ghosts, goblins, witches or anything..." Elizabeth commented, off-handedly, not quite paying attention to her words as they rolled off her tongue.
Re: It's a living h-e-l-l
((I do it the same way as Press. It's really difficult to do in first person...))
CottonCandy- Posts : 2141
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It's a living H-E-L-L
*I laughed*
Last time anyone went in there they came out cyco.
*stopped laughing and thought*
lets go in!
Last time anyone went in there they came out cyco.
*stopped laughing and thought*
lets go in!
Re: It's a living h-e-l-l
((when do we start, or have we already??))
Shining Darkness- Posts : 4039
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It's a living H-E-L-L
(We already started)Living Skeleton. wrote:((when do we start, or have we already??))
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((DUH!!! haha. ))Living Skeleton. wrote:((when do we start, or have we already??))
Re: It's a living h-e-l-l
((Haha... We're waiting on you, Skelly!)
CottonCandy- Posts : 2141
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*thinks* Hmm..... Wonder why? Let's go find out!
Shining Darkness- Posts : 4039
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Press2000 wrote:Elizabeth scanned herself in the mirror once. Jeans, sneakers, hoodie, bun. Check. Everything in order. She casually strutted out of the house, dragging her feet lightly making scarping sounds along the sidewalk.
scccr scccr scccr scccr
Soon, she reached the corner and waited with the others, not saying much of anything. when everyone had gathered, Elizabeth walked the farthest behind in the group as they went to the dark, old, tumbling mansion. Someone asked about it being haunted.
"Hmm, most likely not. Maybe cobwebs and stuff, but I highly doubt there's ghosts, goblins, witches or anything..." Elizabeth commented, off-handedly, not quite paying attention to her words as they rolled off her tongue.
((First person goth said.))
Shining Darkness- Posts : 4039
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Living Skeleton. wrote:Press2000 wrote:Elizabeth scanned herself in the mirror once. Jeans, sneakers, hoodie, bun. Check. Everything in order. She casually strutted out of the house, dragging her feet lightly making scarping sounds along the sidewalk.
scccr scccr scccr scccr
Soon, she reached the corner and waited with the others, not saying much of anything. when everyone had gathered, Elizabeth walked the farthest behind in the group as they went to the dark, old, tumbling mansion. Someone asked about it being haunted.
"Hmm, most likely not. Maybe cobwebs and stuff, but I highly doubt there's ghosts, goblins, witches or anything..." Elizabeth commented, off-handedly, not quite paying attention to her words as they rolled off her tongue.
((First person goth said.))
=P You're so mean. I attempted at it, and it's difficult!
CottonCandy- Posts : 2141
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ok, sorry.. i guess we can do it both ways then.
Shining Darkness- Posts : 4039
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It's okay! I just don't know if I will be able to do first person. I'll make an attempt so I can follow the rules though.
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It's a living H-E-L-L
you can't catch me
*runs insides. Trips on something in the dark.*
hey u guys should come here
*something grabbs my hand*
ha! must be a snake.
*reaches out and feels the thing. it's a cold hand*
Ha! This is really funny!
*starts getting pulled further in. stops acting so happy but still is a little and a little scared*
you guys wanna come in now... hurry
*frowns as being dragged*
weeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee! Help me!*screams at the top of my lungs*
*runs insides. Trips on something in the dark.*
hey u guys should come here
*something grabbs my hand*
ha! must be a snake.
*reaches out and feels the thing. it's a cold hand*
Ha! This is really funny!
*starts getting pulled further in. stops acting so happy but still is a little and a little scared*
you guys wanna come in now... hurry
*frowns as being dragged*
weeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee! Help me!*screams at the top of my lungs*
Re: It's a living h-e-l-l
Gosh... too dark in here! *makes a fire* Hmm.. a bit better. *Looks around* There! *runs after Arya* Whoa.. a zombie! *panics and runs back to others*
Yikes... come on, we have to help her. You all go first!
Yikes... come on, we have to help her. You all go first!
Shining Darkness- Posts : 4039
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"Um..." I said, shuffling my feet. Once I heard the echos of Arya's scream, my eyes widened with fear. At first I thought it was some sort of prank, but I freaked out when I realized that Arya just might not be kidding. I squeezed my eyes shut, and ran into the dark and mysterious building. My courage quickly extinguished when I realized that the house was completely pitch black. I couldn't see anything. Whatsoever. I tugged at my pigtails in frustration. I started getting dizzy. I couldn't take being in the dark. I fell to the ground, closing my eyes, trying to imagine a fire... Warmth, light...
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