The Poetry Topic

Eh... Press posted one first!! Your turn!

*chuckles* please, dont be scared. Just think about it, at least you're not going to have to actually speak it to someone. Like in class.

Or have barely a month to learn two pieces for a piano recital. >.<

i have barely a month to memorize like 5 things for a concert. it ends up only being 2 pages though. And ones pretty easy.

K! I post one nao!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

“Conflagration Assuaged”

Ambivalence appeared
Anomalies occurred
Thousands were appeased
Arrogance magnified

Wars raged
Deaths deplored
Decorum blighted
Prejudice extolled

Fallow seeded
Torment plotted
People destroyed
Jews decried

Races emulate
Nazis debilitate
Degradation apparent
Depravity ruling

Island bombed
Nations coalesce
People beguiled
Candor revealed

Braggart deceived
Bomb dropped
Nation discombobulated
Conflagration assuaged
Jews extricated

What dost thou thinkest?

My writing stinks!!!!!!

That's actually pretty good! ^_^ Keep writing and you'll be as good as other ppl! Not that you aren't bad now or anything...and that you;ll never be 'as good as me' but I'm not too great and all...

That was for an english project in school. I could only use simple sentences, with only a verb and a subject. nothing else. So, of course, It stank

it was fairly good.. and press, you're just being modest. You are a marvelous writer.

*blushes* At least I'm not boastful...at least I hope i'm not...

no i don't think you are. you always say you're not that good, but you are!

Thanks.

lol no problem.

Simple

What if life,
Were simple again?
What if we were children,
Without knowing,
Of war, hate an hunger.
Without longing in our hearts,
For a greater world.

What if laughter,
Were free again?
So that we do not have to pay
And awful price of pain
After we smile,
In remembering
The painful world surrounding us?

What if love,
Were simple for once?
The path laid before us,
So we know which way is the best.
So no one cries,
No one dies,
No tears in my eyes.

that was.. magnificent! had a couple spelling errors though, but still!

that was absolutely wonderful!!!

Thanks

Hehe. Press, you are really good... You make me jealous! I just need a creative mind....

Different people have different skills. She is good at writing. I need to figure out what practical use i can put my skills to.

*eats a full sized donut in 20 seconds*


Hmm... competitive eating champion? lol.
jk, jk. Though i can eat a lot of food if i like it.

Welp... I can... Maybe... Be a pro anime watcher?

if you end up doing that and i find out ill have to become a video game tester!!

lol. I doubt that I'll end up doing it. My parents would hate me for time and all eternity.

I haven't played Frogger in a while...

random. But neither have i...

I think I played about a year ago... Maybe longer than that. Frogger's really fun.

hm. yah. i play zelda twilight princess a lot. I beat it in 18 hours my fastest time. that was my third time. Then i did everything up to and including the forest temple in about an hour.

Wow. You're crazy.