Re: The Poetry Topic

Shining Darkness Wed Apr 16, 2008 11:08 am

indeed it is.

Press2000 Thu Apr 17, 2008 4:12 am

call me nerdy, but my brother was watching an educational channel in the other room, and it was about comets. I suffered a major burst of inspiration and this was the result;
~*~

Comet

Sky Fire
Night Flame
Heart Fear
Mind wonder

Star falling,
Falling down to me.
Night crashing,
Crashing onto me.

Light coming,
Coming soon.
Wonder and fear,
Brilliance and death.

Night Crashing
Star Flashing
Light Coming

Shining Darkness Thu Apr 17, 2008 2:11 pm

Press2000 wrote:call me nerdy, but my brother was watching an educational channel in the other room, and it was about comets. I suffered a major burst of inspiration and this was the result;
~*~

Comet

Sky Fire
Night Flame
Heart Fear
Mind wonder

Star falling,
Falling down to me.
Night crashing,
Crashing onto me.

Light coming,
Coming soon.
Wonder and fear,
Brilliance and death.

Night Crashing
Star Flashing
Light Coming

lol.. on the second day of school someone called my nerdy.

Dreamer Fri Apr 18, 2008 11:55 am

that's so mean!

Shining Darkness Fri Apr 18, 2008 12:33 pm

Not exactly... What i said made me sound kinda nerdy...

I had beaten a lot of games, some with amazing times, some multiple times, and read harry potter 7 three times in a month.

Lol.. I didn't mind.

Dreamer Sat Apr 19, 2008 9:07 am

lol but still that's really mean...

Press2000 Wed Apr 23, 2008 10:04 am

I have...three.... >.<
~-*-~-*-~

Be Free

Fly high,
My love.
Touch the highest mountain,
Let your golden wings soar.
Sail away,
My only.
Find the greatest city,
And let your ship go fast.
Soar far,
My dear.
Kiss the brightest star.
And let yourself go.
Be strong,
My love.
Let yourself be free.
~*~

No Meaning

Poems and words,
Just poems and words
Nothing of meaning

Lines that fall deaf
To ears that wont listen
To my cries and pleas

Tears falling in vain
In front of eyes
That will not watch

Lullabies and whispers
Just lullabies and whispers
Nothing to you
~*~

I am here!

Don’t you see me?
Can’t you hear me?
Can’t you feel me?
Do you not know me?

I am here!
I am crying!
I am reaching for you,
I have seen you before.

Can’t you look at me?
Can’t you listen to me?

I am here!
I am talking to you!
I am shouting!
I am screaming!
I am dying…
I have died…

Did you see me?
Did you hear me?
Did you feel me?
Do you remember me?

CottonCandy Wed Apr 23, 2008 11:24 am

Hehe... So I'm currently reading Twilight, and... Wow. Press, I could've sworn you wrote it. I'm totally attatched to the book. I've been staying up late reading it... It's too addicting... It just seems like a story Press would've wrote, so I dunno. Just the wording and stuff... It's so similar to all your stories! Especially your vampire one...

I dunno. Maybe I'm just being an idiot.

Dreamer Thu Apr 24, 2008 7:46 am

i need to ask sg for that book...

Press2000 Thu Apr 24, 2008 9:36 am

HAHA! I WISH I wrote that! Those books are my favorites. I never really examines the style of writing, so I can't tell. But ya know, haha, thanks for the compliment. Gave me a good laugh.

The stupid MAT tests fried my brain. I wrote two poems when I was done out of boredom. You know what's freaky?

...

....

They...were...HAPPY poems. *shocking!*

CottonCandy Fri Apr 25, 2008 7:27 am

lol No problemo! I miss your old avatar. I appreciate it now!! *huggles Edward* He's mine.

Haha... Happy poems are good though, no worries!

Press2000 Fri Apr 25, 2008 7:53 am

but scary when they come from my mouth....

CottonCandy Fri Apr 25, 2008 11:40 am

Scary? Really... I wouldn't think so...

Press2000 Sat Apr 26, 2008 3:45 am

heh, you're not emo, that's the thing. K? K. cool. ^_^

CottonCandy Tue Apr 29, 2008 8:28 am

What makes you think I'm not emo? Maybe I secretly am... =o

Nah, jk.

Shining Darkness Tue Apr 29, 2008 8:35 am

hm. Dunno.

Press2000 Thu May 08, 2008 8:26 am

My Time

This day has got me going
This type of spring time growing
I'm still smiling like I never cried
I'm still running like I've never died

I see rainbows full of summer time colors
And when I think of him I see summer time lovers
But come winter again when things fall down
I'll be wearing my same old frown

Trying to find something that's been lost
Trying to figure if our paths will ever cross
Trying to reach, to touch the stars
But sometimes they seem just too far...

I'm still playing like I never lost
Even though I know the cost
But I hear summer time coming
I feel the excitement running

I know another year is passing
I know soon again I'll be laughing
I feel my heart beating like it was never gone
I know the time is near, it's not too long

Shining Darkness Thu May 08, 2008 9:58 am

nice.

Press2000 Fri May 09, 2008 4:46 am

thanks

Shining Darkness Fri May 09, 2008 1:30 pm

You're welcome.

Cleston Thu Jun 26, 2008 2:06 am

the poem is entitled pie
I WILL EAT YOU

10 good things about kansas

LOL

Dreamer Thu Jun 26, 2008 3:28 am

nice

Cleston Fri Jun 27, 2008 1:12 am

there is a song with the same name 10 seconts of air

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